Today, I begin to write my journal of English Learning. And this is the first one.
I will write my thoughts or some new words, phrase about my learning English every day. In theses days, I have listened POC ENGLISH video in the youtube, that’s is high quality video about English learning. I will pay more attention to the video. By the way , the POC ENGLISH has their own website, there is a lot of blogs in that website, all of them are pretty good .
AI fixed:
“Today, I begin documenting my English learning journey. This is my first journal entry.
I’ll record my thoughts, new vocabulary, and English phrases daily. Recently, I’ve been watching high-quality videos from POC English on YouTube and plan to focus more on their content.
By the way, POC English has its own website featuring numerous excellent blog articles.”
原句 问题类型 修正建议
- the first one 冠词不当 my first journal entry
- listened POC video 动词误用 + 无冠词 watched POC English videos
- have listened 时态不自然 have been watching
- pay attention 略生硬 focus on / prioritize
- their own website 代词不一致 its own website
- a lot of blogs 冗余表达 many blog articles