Today, I resolved a complex problem, now, I reviewed the process, found a lot of experience I could learn .
First, when facing to complication that I have never seen. I should be more patient , the problem that I resolved cost one day to finish. In the process, I felt anxious , frustrating, but never gave up. in the end, I found the solution.
Second, I must gather enough information before starting, in other words, the context of the problem must be clear. so , I could analyse the problem with the full context. and repeat it.
Finally, thought the experience is so important, but I must be objective.
优化后的日记：
Today I solved a complex problem. Now that I’m reviewing the process, I’ve learned so much from this experience.
First, when facing a challenge I’d never encountered before, I realized I should be more patient. It took me a whole day to solve it. During the process, I felt anxious and frustrated, but I never gave up. In the end, I found the solution.
Second, I must gather enough information before starting. In other words, I need to fully understand the problem first. Only then can I properly analyze it and try different approaches.
Finally, although this experience was very valuable, I have to remember to stay objective about it.
🔍 问题解析与学习建议：
1. 时态与时间表达
| 原句 | 问题 | 修正 | 建议 |
|---|---|---|---|
| I resolved…now I reviewed | 时态混乱 | 分开处理时间点 | 当前动作：现在完成时(I’ve learned)过去动作：一般过去时(I solved) |
| 学习点：描述已完成用过去时，当前感悟用现在时 |
2. 常见搭配错误
| 问题表达 | 正确搭配 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| facing to | facing (+名词) | facing challenges |
| cost one day to finish | took me a day | It took me 3 hours |
| thought…but | although | Although it hurt, it helped |
| 学习点：记住核心动词：take time, face challenges, feel emotions |
3. 句子连接问题
- Finally, thought the experience is so important, but...
+ Finally, although this experience was very valuable...
为什么改：英语中though/although不与but连用
建议：用Although…/Even though…（无需but）
4. 中式英语修正
| 原表达 | 自然表达 | 说明 |
|---|---|---|
| found a lot of experience | learned so much | Experience不可数 |
| must be objective | stay objective | 客观是状态 |
| repeat it | try different approaches | “repeat"易误解 |
| 学习点：用learn from experience固定搭配 |
5. 情绪描写强化
优化方案：
“felt anxious and frustrated” ➜ 用and连接并列情绪
“never gave up” ➜ 保持原句（亮点短语）
6. 逻辑衔接优化
添加过渡词使流程清晰：
- Step1: ...before starting
+ Step2: In other words... (解释说明)
+ Step3: Only then can I... (强调条件)
💡 实用写作技巧：
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问题解决日记模板：
Today I overcame______. The challenge was ______. I learned 3 things: 1) [耐心/坚持] When______, I should ______. 2) [准备] Before starting, always______. 3) [反思] Even though ______, remember to______. -
每日动词强化表：
中文 避免 推荐 解决 resolved solved/fixed 遇到 have never seen encountered 花费时间 cost time took me [时间] -
连接词升级：
复制 首先：At first → When I started 其次：Second → What I realized next 最后：Finally → The biggest takeaway was